Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校学生会正招募选手代表学校参加”英语辩论赛”(English Debate Competition)，你想申请参加。现请你向学生会主席写一封申请信，内容包括:

1. 表达你的愿望；2. 描述你的特长；3. 希望得到批准。

注意:1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chairman,

The Students’ Union is recruiting some students to participate in English Debate Competition on behalf of our school. I’m extremely eager to be one of the team members.

I have shown my great English talent since I was seven years old. So far, I have had effective communication and oral expression skills in English. I’ve also been good at thinking logically and persuading others to believe my points of view. Besides, I’ve taken part in several Chinese Debate Competitions before, which I think can show my competence in debating with others.

I hope that I’ll have the honor to represent our school in the competition. I will appreciate it if you can approve of my application as soon as possible. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，申请参加英语辩论赛。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式结构。第一段表达写信目的；第二段描述个人特长；第三段描述希望获准

要求：1. 表达你的愿望；（be eager to be one of the team members）

2. 描述你的特长；

1）英语流利（effective communication and oral expression skills）

2）逻辑思维能力和说服力较强（be good at thinking logically and persuading others）

3）经验丰富（have taken part in; before）

3. 希望得到批准。（approve of my application）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

participate in; on behalf of; be eager to; be good at; persuade sb. to do; take part in; have the honor to do; as soon as possible; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. The Students’ Union is recruiting some students to participate in English Debate Competition on behalf of our school.

2. I’m extremely eager to be one of the team members.

3. I’ve also been good at thinking logically and persuading others to believe my points of view.

4. Besides, I’ve taken part in several Chinese Debate Competitions before, which I think can show my competence in debating with others.

5. I hope that I’ll have the honor to represent our school in the competition.

6. I will appreciate it if you can approve of my application as soon as possible.

7. Looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including,

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改