Question

【题目】书面表达

请以 An Environmental Protection Activity为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。要点如下：

1．时间：上周天。地点：海宝公园。

2. 活动内容：分三组进行环保活动。

3. 谈谈你对这次活动的看法。

参考词汇：set up boards, give a speech, etc.

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

An Environmental Protection Activity

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Answer 1

【答案】

An Environmental Protection Activity

Last Sunday our class organized an environmental protection activity in Haibao Park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups. The first group collected the rubbish, such as the wasted paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.

I think it is very important for us to protect the environment. For the sake of people’s health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文。要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文，文章结构合理，语言简练，要点齐全，文中运用高级句子。On arriving there, we were divided into three groups.一般过去时态的被动语态用在句中；The first group...，The second group...，The last group显得层次分明；I think it is very important for us to protect the environment.宾语从句和形式主语完美结合；高级词组For the sake of使用得当；measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution含情态动词的被动语态和动词不定式作目的状语。