Question

18．请根据如图写一篇100～120个词的短文．你的短文应包括下列要点：

1．简要描写图画内容．
2．说明图画含义．
3．从中学生的角度谈谈你的看法．参考词汇：container n．容器．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：As is shown in the above picture，the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food，it starts to enjoy the crops busily，totally ignoring the potential danger．本句是一个较复杂的句式，as是一个关系代词引导了一个定语从句，as在此指代的是主句the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food，it starts to enjoy the crops busily，totally ignoring the potential danger的内容；ignoring是现在分词在句中做伴随状语，逻辑主语为the mouse； the moment 此处为时间状语"一…就"的连词引导了时间状语从句．
高分句型二：The picture vividly conveys the message that one cannot just focus on the present comfortable life without making preparations for his/her future．这是一个同位语从句．从句that one cannot just focus on the present comfortable life without making preparations for his/her future是名词message的同位语．

解答 As is shown in the above picture，the moment the mouse gets into the huge container full of food，it starts to enjoy the crops busily，totally ignoring the potential danger．（高分句型一）After it consumes the last grain of crop，to its horror，it suddenly finds itself trapped in the container．（描述图画）
The picture vividly conveys the message that one cannot just focus on the present comfortable life without making preparations for his/her future．（高分句型二）We students can certainly learn something from this．Some of us are addicted to video games and don't take their study seriously．All that they care about is the present‘happy'life．But the truth is that if we don't study hard now and equip ourselves with enough knowledge and skills，we will get into serious trouble in the future．So，to avoid the miserable ending of the mouse，let's take action now!（阐明观点）

点评 要写好英语的看图作文首先，要根据题目所要求及画面展示确定好题材与体裁．其次，要确定好行文的人称与时态的基调．再次，要在句与句以及段与段之间加一些表转折、递进和因果等关系的关联词与过渡句，使文章前后照应，行文流畅．