Question

【题目】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

It was the hottest time of the year in southern California. Steve, a star basketball player at the University of California, with his cousin Zach, had planned a camping trip in the Great National Forest for their summer vacation.

The boys gathered clothes and supplies, and began their great adventure with Brady the dog early in the morning. Upon arrival, Steve pulled over to the side of the road along the bank of the river. "A wonderful place for fishing," Steve exclaimed in delight. Zach nodded in agreement.

At high noon, the sun was scorching hot. With a good harvest of fish, the boys marched into the forest with Brady following them. After a long walk, they found a clearing that was ideal for a campsite. The camp was set up immediately as Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper.

An afternoon nap was absolutely a special treat in mid-summer. However, the boys were waken up by the fierce barks of Brady. Outside, heavy smoke filled the air and wind-blown flame was skipping from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer turned the forest into a tinderbox. In a little while, Steve and Zach were inside their tent packing their belongings.

“Let's go! We can make it back to the river!" They headed down against the fire-wind in the direction of the river. But Brady barked a sharp warming. Ahead of them lay a thick curtain of smoke across the track. They would never make it through that. Steve was uneasy for it was hard to find a safe way to escape in the heavy smoke.

Brady lifted his head and snuffed（嗅）the smoke-laden wind. Next moment, the dog bounded away and disappeared down a sharp slope（坡）. The boys shouted for him, but he didn't come back. Steve couldn't blame Brady for panicking. He himself wanted to run even though he didn't have a clue which way.

Paragraph 1:

Steve and Zach hadn`t gone far when there was a familiar bark.

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Paragraph 2:

Brady pulled again, in spite of the boy's disbelief, urgently.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

Steve and Zach hadn't gone far when there was a familiar bark. Brady came bounding,stopped directly in front of Steve and hit him with his head, pushing him back toward the slope. But Steve didn't get it. "Then Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and started pulling. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered Brady saving his uncle's life when the dog was much younger. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this?

Paragraph2：

Brady puled again, in spite of the boy's disbelief, urgently. “OK, big guy, "seeing the fire was touching underbrush nearby, Steve made up his mind. Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped. Often he changed directions to find the right way. The boys were so tired but the dog bullied both boys to go on. Steve was almost numb when he heard it-the wonderful sound of rushing water! They made it back to the river.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要记叙了在南加州一年中最热的时候，Steve和Zach以及小狗Brady一起去大国家森林露营，结果遇到了森林大火，被困在了森林中。而这是Brady却跑开了，孩子们大声喊他，但他没有回来。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Steve和Zach还没走多远，就听到了熟悉的狗叫声。后文应当描写Brady回来后的情况，Brady拉车男孩的裤腿想要带他离开，Steve却犹豫了，他怀疑Brady有足够的头脑能让他们渡过难关。第二段开头是：Brady不顾男孩的怀疑，再次紧急地拉了起来。后文应当描写在Brady的带领下，男孩子们最终得救的过程。