Question

【题目】一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英文稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

写作要点：它是中国传统节日之一；家人团聚；赏月、吃月饼、还有旅游、访友等其他活动。

注意：

(1)词数100左右；

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯；

(3)开头语已您写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：中秋节:the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历: lunar calendar

赏月: enjoy the full moon 月饼: moon cake

The Mid- Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar.

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Answer 1

【答案】The Mid- Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求学生介绍中秋节以及这个节日的主要活动。话题贴近生活，学生也比较熟悉。是比较好写的一篇作文。这篇作文主要采取现在时态。学生在写作过程中，容易出现逐条翻译的问题。建议学生们适当增加情节，使文章内容丰富。

【范文点评】该范文表达比较流畅，采用了popularity，no matter how，a wider range of等较高级词汇和短语。成功运用了现在完成进行时态（has been enjoying great popularity），主语从句（what we love most），with的复合结构（with the beautiful moon up in the sky），非谓语动词（sharing our stories）等高级句式。