Question

4．来自英国的Tom，上周参加了当地某旅行社组织的旅游服务，他很不满意．所以，他想就此事给该旅行社写一封投诉信．内容包括：
1．写信目的；2．不满之处；3．表达期望．
注意：1．词数不少于80；=2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear sir，
My name is Tom，who is a customer of your travel agency．_____________________________
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 本文为投诉信．
写作要点为：1．写信目的；2．不满之处；3．表达期望．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Sir，
My name is Tom，who is a customer of your travel agency．Here I'm sorry to express my dissatisfaction with the service of your travel agency．
First of all，during the trip the tour guide not only introduced too many activities at our own expense but also took us to so many different places to do shopping，which occupied much time．Besides，I don't think the guide is competent enough because he had no good knowledge of t he scenic spots and was rude to us．What was worse，the food served was of poor quality and the accommodation conditions were awful．
Hopefully，you can take all the above into careful consideration and also take some measures to improve your service．
Yours sincerely，
Tom

点评 考生需熟悉书信格式．考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．