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请对下面的短文进行修改。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with
my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.


【小题1】does→is
【小题2】go→went
【小题3】was→were
【小题4】what→which
【小题5】在cinema前加the
【小题6】but →and
【小题7】去掉been
【小题8】moving→moved
【小题9】tear→tears
【小题10】very→well

解析试题分析:
【小题1】Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life.(上文用的是“is”,所以下文仍用“is”="my" life is also full of sunshine)
【小题2】At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends.( 我跟朋友去书店是过去发生的事情,要用一般过去时)
【小题3】There was a lot of new books. (主语是“books”为复数。所以要将was改成were)
【小题4】I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. (what用于无范围的指代,而which用于有一定范围内的指代。)
【小题5】At 10:00, we went to cinema.( 去看电影“go to the cinema”为习惯表达)
【小题6】The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. (上下文没有转折关系,而是承递关系)
【小题7】It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, (“see”的逻辑主语就是句子的主语“”,它们之间是主动关系,不是被动关系。)
【小题8】everyone was deeply moving.( 现在分词作表语说明主语所具有的性质或特征,而过去分词表语说明主语所具有的心理感受,这儿是指人的心理感受“被感动了”)
【小题9】Some of my friends even burst into tear.( “burst into tears突然大哭起来”是固定搭配)
【小题10】That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing. (修饰worth的副词习惯要用well,而不能用very)
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.
考点:短文纠错

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