Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你校将举办以“What should I do to Ensure an Eco-friendly World”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请给在英国朋友的Peter写一封邮件告知你要参加这次竞赛,要点如下：

1.时间地点；2.参赛原因；3.他的建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I feel honored to inform you of the thrilling news. I am going to participate in the English speech contest, whose theme is “What Should I Do to Ensure An Eco-friendly World?”

As scheduled, the speech contest will be held on September 30th in the lecture hall of our school. As we know, ecology is to us human beings what water is to fish, but it is worsening, so it is of great necessity to attach great importance to making joint efforts to make our home eco-friendly. Undoubtedly, not only will this activity provide us with the chance to practice my speaking skill, but it will also raise our awareness of environmental protection.

But now I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts. So would you please share your suggestions concerning it?

Your timely help will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。

这是一篇提纲类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你校将举办以“What should I do to Ensure an Eco-friendly World”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请给在英国朋友的Peter写一封邮件告知你要参加这次竞赛,要点如下：1.时间地点；2.参赛原因；3.他的建议。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：inform sb of；participate in；attach great importanceto；make efforts；raise awareness of；look forward to等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。