Question

9．某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening）、烹饪（cooking）、防身术（self-defense）、护理（nursing）．
   假如你是王跃华，写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，信的内容必须包括：
1．你感兴趣的课程．
2．你期望从这门课程中学到什么．
3．为什么想学这些内容．
注意：
1．词数：100词左右．
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一封申请信，报名参加英语夏令营的一门课程的学习，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：你感兴趣的课程．你期望从这门课程中学到什么．为什么想学这些内容．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为作者感兴趣的课程以及期望从中学到什么．第二部分为学习此课程的原因．
重点短语与句型：
be available to 可得到的，可利用的
tell..apart 区分开来
Last but not least最后但同样重要
add…to 增添，增加
高分句型一：The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden．．此句用了why 引导定语从句以及that引导的表语从句
高分句型二：In addition，I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening，missing a chance to have a word with nature，so that knowing the surroundings is indispensable．此句用了现在分词missing作结果状语，顺其自然的结果

解答 Dear Sir，
It is said that a summer camp is to be held in your school and a few courses are available to choose from．I am interested in gardening because I believe it features my character and personal benefits．During the learning period，I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge．A radical technique I'd like to obtain is to know how to tell different species of plants and flowers apart．This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden．Furthermore，the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn．A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or the reasonable planting positions will also be a good choice．（作者感兴趣的课程以及期望从中学到什么）
The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden．（高分句型一）In addition，I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening，missing a chance to have a word with nature，so that knowing the surroundings is indispensable（高分句型二）．Last but not least，by attending the course，I will have a meaningful summer vacation，and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life．（学习此课程的原因）
Yours
Wang Yuehua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．