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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have been taken place in the school over the past three years.

In May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroys almost everything in the school，leaving badly-damaged buildings. It is now, however, taking on a new look. Tall building have been put up, including classrooms and laboratory buildings, and a library. There has also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happy and working hard. It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school, full of life.

Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that has brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if you unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.

Answer 1

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【解析】第一处：考查介词的应用。在具体到月日的日期名词前，介词用on。故In改为On。

第二处：考查语境及时态的应用。a severe earthquake destroys almost everything in the school，句意：一场地震几乎破坏了学校的每一处。可知此事发生在过去，应用过去时态。故destroys改为destroyed。

第三处：考查谓语动词与主语关系的应用。 Tall building have been put up, including classrooms and laboratory buildings,谓语动词为have，则主语应为复数，故building改为buildings。

第四处：考查系动词的应用。There has also a newly-built standard playground.此句应为There be句型。故has改为is。

第五处：考查副词的应用。In the new environment, teachers and students are living happy and working hard.后面的词修饰动词living，应用副词。故happy改为happily。

第六处：考查形容词的应用。It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school,句子的主语不是人，所以后面的形容词用ing形式。故amazed改为amazing。

第七处：考查冠词的应用。It is really amazed that the once-ruined place has now been turned into beautiful school,学校为一个，则应有冠词a。故在 beautiful前加a。

第八处：考查谓语动词的应用。 It is love and concern that has brought about the great changes.此句的主语为复数，谓语动词应与之对应。故has改为have。

第九处：考查人称代词的应用。 We can work wonders if you unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.后面的人称应与前面的对应。故you改为we。