Question

你的同学刘芳乐于助人(helpful),积极乐观(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。请根据题示,用英语写一篇短文向英语报       English Times投稿,简要叙述她做好事的经过,并谈谈你的感想。

注意:(1)短文须包括上述全部要点,应适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数:100左右。短文开头已给出(不计词数)。
   Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.                                                                        
                                                                             

Answer 1

Possible version:
Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.
Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was Ok, she left for school.
Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

考查了记叙文的写作
试题分析：本文考查了记叙文的写作，故事的梗概已经给出。刘芳乐于助人，看见老人摔倒，他主动提出帮助，并对老人进行适当的包扎治疗和救助。并拨打120急救电话，协助医生对病人进行护理。
点评：近年来对记叙文写作的考查不是很多，记叙文的写作要求考生以故事方式的梗概为顺序，审题时注意使用一般过去时，合理的组织要点，运用合适的连接词和高级的句型如倒装句，强调句，省略句等来让文章有所变化。