Question

假设你现在正参加一场英语演讲比赛，你抽到的演讲题目是Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine. 请你就该话题展开演讲。你的演讲必须包含以下三个方面的内容：

1. 你对此话的理解；

2. 用一个事例来支持你的理解；

3. 总结发言。

注意：词数120左右。首尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Ladies and Gentlemen,

It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”.

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Thanks for your attention!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and Gentlemen,

 It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”. It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towards life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success.

Here I share one of my experiences with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t apply myself to study, resulting in failing an important examination. As you can guess, I got very frustrated. I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood, my headteacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said, “In life we all have those moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you.” The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved in the next examination.

As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile, you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life.

【解析】

试题分析：考察半开放性作文写作。本文的话题是“微笑面对生活，每一天都充满阳光”；讲述的是乐观向上的情绪对我们的影响。当我们用积极向上的态度对待一切的时候，我们会非常开心。工作的效率也会非常高。另外还可以从相反的方面做进一步的阐述，如果我们不能微笑面对生活，我们可能会遇见很多困难。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：考察半开放性作文写作

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。