Question

【题目】假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：

1.参加者；2.时间、地点；3.活动：登山、野餐等。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris，

I am sincerely inviting you to join us to go for an outing this weekend．Aiming to enhance our relation and build up our bodies，the trip involves climbing mountains and a picnic．（高分句型一）（活动：登山、野餐等）As is scheduled，the activity will take place at 8：00am on Saturday at the gate of our scholl and we hope all the students in our class will take an activite part in it．（高分句型二）（参加者、时间、地点）Climbing is an important part of the trip．While pushing our strength to the limit，we are also breathing fresh air and appreciating the gorgeous scenery on the way．（高分句型三）

Hope you won't miss the joyful activity．Your attendance is greatly expected．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

题干要求给英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加计划组织的一次郊游。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分内容：写作背景（邀请参加郊游）；第二部分内容：郊游安排（时间，地点，活动以及参加者的信息）；第三部分内容：希望他能参加。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：现在分词作状语Aiming to enhance our relation and build up our bodies，the trip involves climbing mountains and a picnic；as引导的非限制性定语从句As is scheduled，the activity will take place at 8：00am on Saturday at the gate of our school……；状语从句While pushing our strength to the limit，we are also breathing fresh air and appreciating the gorgeous scenery on the way。2.使用了重要短语：build up增进，加强；take place发生；take an active part in积极参加。