Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Harry写信询问你最喜欢的运动，请根据下列提示写一封100词左右的回信，介绍你最喜欢的运动――篮球。

1.打篮球能增强体质，放松自我。

2.通过篮球，我学会了如何与他人的更好地合作，同时，我交了一些好朋友。

3.我最喜欢的篮球明星是姚明，我希望长大后当一名篮球运动员，为祖国效力。

为……效力serve

Dear Harry,

I am very glad to have received your letter

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Harry,

I am very glad to have received your letter. I would like to tell you something about my favorite sport.

Of all the sports, I like basketball best. In my opinion, playing basketball can build up strength. What’s more, basketball is a good way to relax myself in my spare time. What is the most important is that it can help us to learn to cooperate with each other, and now I have made some good friends through this sport.

My favourite basketball star is Yao Ming, who is well-known all over the world. I hope to be a basketball star when I grow up so that I can serve my motherland as a basketball athlete.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求用100词左右按题目所列出的提纲写一封回信，向美国朋友介绍自己最喜欢的一项运动---篮球。考生在写作的时候可以对给出的要点进行提炼和加工，要注意合理使用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如定语从句，强调句，倒装句等，让文章更能上一个档次。同时要注意人称、时态及常见的语法问题，同时在列举喜欢篮球的理由时，注意使用适当的连接词，如In my opinion, What’s more等，这样能让文章看起来更有条理，也更加流畅。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁但不简单，运用了一些词组：would like to想……，in my opinion依我看，我认为，what’s more而且，in my spare time在我业余时间里；同时运用了一些比较高级的句型：What is the most important（主语从句）is that it can help us to learn to cooperate with each other（表语从句），who is well-known all over the world（定语从句），so that I can serve my motherland as a basketball athlete（目的状语从句）等。