假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It seems that there are a larger number of beggar in the streets than there used
to be. I don’t know how we should help them or not. Once I give some money to a beggar
who looked poor. However, a few minutes later, I saw him bought some cigarettes. It
really shocked at me. In my opinion, anyone who work hard can make a living. I’m
afraid that giving them money isn’t best way to help them. Maybe the government can
take some action to helping them. Anyway, if they want to live a better living, they should
learn to depend on ourselves.
1.beggar →beggars
2.how →whether
3.give →gave
4.bought →buying或buy
5.去掉at
6.work →works
7.best前面加the
8.helping →help
9.living →life
10.ourselves-themselves
【解析】
试题分析：
1.】beggar →beggars 形容词短语a number of许多，大量；该词通常修饰可数名词复数形式，所以后面使用beggers。
2.】how →whether 固定搭配whether…or not是否；句意：我不主动是否可以帮助他们。
3.give →gave 本句叙述的是过去发生的事情“我曾经给过乞丐钱”，所以使用一般过去时的时态。
4.bought →buying或buy 本句中应该使用buy或者buying作为宾语补足语，构成see sb do sth看见某人做了某事，或者see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事。其中的do/doing对宾语him的情况进行补充说明。因为构成主动关系，不能使用done的形式。
5.去掉at 本句中的动词shock“使…震惊”是一个及物动词，后面直接加宾语，at是多余的。
6.】work →works 本句是一个定语从句，先行词是anyone，定语从句中who指代anyone做主语，谓语动词使用单数形式。
7.best前面加the 最高级best前面有定冠词the表示特指，意为“帮助他们最好的方法”。
8.】helping →help 本句中的不定式to do sth在句中是目的状语，意为“采取行动做某事”。
9.】living →life 固定搭配live a life可以在life前面加形容词修饰，表示“过着……的生活”；
10.ourselves-themselves另外本句的主语是they，所以后面应该使用themselves作为depend on的宾语。
考点：短文改错
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