Question

【题目】假如你是李华，暑假期间美国圣保罗中学( St. Paul’s School) 进行了为期三周的学习和交流。在此期间. 你的美国朋友约翰逊先生:(Mr Johnson)在语言、生活等方面给你很大帮助, 请根据下列提示和你的想象写一份书信。

1. 表达对约翰逊先生的感激之情;

2. 感谢约翰逊先生所给予的帮助;

3. 邀请约翰逊先生来中国观光旅游。

注意:

1. 词数100 左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,

How time flies! It has been some days since I left St. Paul’s School. However, whenever I think of the wonderful three weeks I spent in America, I just can’t help thinking of your help. And I’m writing to express my thanks to you from the bottom of my heart.

In St. Paul’s School, it was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my staying there such a happy and lucky experience. My English was very poor but you tried your best to give me a hand, and soon my English improved a lot. What’s more, you always encouraged me to keep positive whenever I was in trouble in life.

I’ll never forget this trip as well as your kindness. And I hope you’ll have a chance to pay a visit to great China in future.

Best regards to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】此文为提纲式作文，文章主题为感谢信。文章可分为三段，第一段点名写作背景，交代写作目的。第二段列举感谢原因，第三段再次表达感谢，并邀请其来中国旅游。

文章以第二人称为主，时态以过去时为主，同时注意感谢的语言要诚恳。

亮点分析：文章语言简练，结构条理清晰，注意使用短语或句型来表达自己的感情： 如how time flies! I just can’t help thinking of your help; it was so kind of you to have provided; such a happy and lucky experience; you tried your best to give me a hand; you always encouraged me to keep positive 等等语言，使感激之情表达的淋漓尽致。