Question

16．当前，家长普遍认为现在孩子的行为习惯没有他们自己小时候的好．请你根据下表所提供的信息写一篇英语文章，简单介绍一下这种现象及出现这种现象的原因，并针对这种现象提一些建议．

现象	家长小时候	懂礼貌、尊重别人、循规蹈矩
	现在的小孩	不乐于助人、不尊重别人、崇尚自由．
原因	1．互联网及电视节目中不良信息的影响 2．家长和老师过分关注学生成绩，忽视对学生行为习惯的培养
建议	（提出至少两点建议）…

注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
2．词数150左右．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
Nowadays，a large number of children have bad manners while their parents behaved well when they were at the same age．

Answer 1

分析 本文需要解决的问题是：对比家长小时候及现在孩子的行为习惯，说明为什么会出现现在孩子的行为习惯没有他们自己小时候的好的原因．
写作要点是：1，现象；2，原因；3，建议．

解答 One possible version：
Nowadays，a large number of children have bad manners while their parents behaved well when they were at the same age．
When their parents were young，they behaved well，having good manners，respecting others and obeying rules of all kinds．On the contrary，children now are not ready to help others．Actually，they don't show respect for others and they express themselves and behave freely．
The reasons are related to many factors，one of which is the ill information on the Internet and in TV programmes because it has a bad influence on children．Worse still，parents pay too much attention to their scores，ignoring the fact that children's behaviors should be their greatest concern．
        Considering the seriousness of this problem，effective measures should be taken．In my opinion，parents and teachers are supposed to set an example of good behaviors to children as they are role models to them．Meanwhile，the information on the Internet or TV should be under strict control．Only in these ways can we help children develop good behaviors．（152 words）

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．