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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms. Helen,

I am pleasing to offer you the position of after-sales manager in our company starting on 16 June, 2016. You were given the right to discuss this offer and to seek advices on the attached proposed agreement with your family, a lawyer, or someone else you trust. Unless you want some information on your employment rights, you can also contact the Employment Service Office or visiting our website.

Also, if you disagree this offer or wish to clarify something in it, please ring myself to discuss any issue you wish to raise.

If you are happy with the proposed terms and wish to accept an offer of employment, please sign this letter and return it to me by 1 June, 2016. In case of I have not heard from you by that date, this offer will be automatical withdrawn.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】pleasing---pleased

【2】were---are

【3】advices---advice

【4】Unless---If

【5】visiting--- visit

【6】disagree后添加with

【7】myself---me

【8】an---the

【9】去掉please

【10】automatical---automatically

【解析】

【1】pleasing---pleased考查形容词。形容人应该用-ed形式的形容词，故改为pleased。

【2】were---are考查时态。本文是一般现在时，故改为are。

【3】advices---advice考查单复数。根据语境可知这里是单数形式的建议，故改为advice。

【4】Unless---If考查虚拟语气。这里是表示疑问性的虚拟语气，需要表示“如果”的词汇，故改为If。

【5】visiting--- visit考查动词。Or前后的动词的格式结构相同，前面是原形，后面也应是原形，故改为visit。

【6】disagree后添加with 考查固定结构。Disagree with sth./sb.是固定结构，故添加with。

【7】myself---me考查宾语。动词后面用宾语，ring sb. to do是固定用法，故改为me。

【8】an---the考查冠词。这里是用于特指，故改为the。

【9】去掉please考查上下文联系。根据语境可知这里是表示客气的虚拟语气，please在这里重复，故去掉please。

【10】automatical---automatically考查副词。Automatically用来形容withdrawn.，故改为automatically。