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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I asked George, a friend of mine was still alive after the earthquake, what had been happened. He said he had just got into bed at half past eleven when he felt the floor shaking over him. The bed started to shake and he saw electric light was moving. I asked him what he did then, and who replied that he got out of bed quick and went to look out of the window. As he looked, he saw the house to the other side of the street begin to shake, either. Then he knew which was happening. He seized her clothes and rushed out into the street.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】mine后加who

【2】happened前面的been去掉

【3】over→under

【4】electric前加the

【5】who→he

【6】quick→quickly

【7】to→on

【8】either→too

【9】which→what

【10】her→his

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】mine后加who a friend of mine作先行词，指人，在后面的定语从句中作主语，所以在a friend of mine后加who。

【2】happened前面的been去掉 happen是不及物动词，无被动语态，故把been去掉。

【3】over→under 句意：感觉到他下面的地板在摇动。地板在他下面，故把over改为under。

【4】electric前加the 此处特指“电灯”，故在electric前加the。

【5】who→he 根据and可知，是并列句，故把who改为he。

【6】quick→quickly 副词修饰动词，故把quick改为quickly。

【7】to→on 表示在街道的另一边。故把to改为on。

【8】either→too 此处是肯定句，表示“也”，故把either改为too。

【9】which→what 此处宾语从句缺少引导词，缺少主语，故把which改为what。

【10】her→his 根据主语He可知，把her改为his。

【知识归纳】

1.英语中“发生”的词有：happen/take plce/break out/come about/occur，他们都是不及物动词，所以无被动语态。The story happened in 1998.

2.too/also/as well在肯定句中表示“也”；either在否定句中表示“也”。