Question

【题目】假如你是英语报纸English Corner栏目的编辑李华，现在有个叫李明的学生向你请教如何学好英语。下面你就如何学好英语以书信的形式给他提出几条建议。

1．每天早上朗读英语单词、句子及短文。尽量多记一些有用的句子并背诵一些短文章。

2．经常进行大量的课外阅读。

3．每天应安排一些时间进行听力练习。

4．只要你能充分利用你的业余时间来学习英语，你的英语就会很快得到提高。

注意：1.内容应包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使文章连贯；

2．开头已给出，但不计入总词数；

3．词数：100左右。

Dear Li Ming，

I'm an editor of English Corner. I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well.

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All the best!

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Ming，

I am an editor of English Corner. I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well. Here are some of my suggestions.

First of all, I suggest you (should) read the English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning. Meanwhile, you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well. Moreover, it is suggested that you (should) read a great variety of books after school. Last but not least, a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises.

As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English, surely, you will make rapid progress. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” If you stick to your dream and study hard, I'm sure you will be successful in your English study.

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，给李明提出几条关于如何学好英语的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

要求：有以下几点建议

1．每天早上朗读英语单词、句子及短文。尽量多记一些有用的句子并背诵一些短文章。

2．经常进行大量的课外阅读。

3．每天应安排一些时间进行听力练习。

4．只要你能充分利用你的业余时间来学习英语，你的英语就会很快得到提高。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

suggest sb. do sth.; read sth. aloud; try to do sth.; memorize; recite; It is suggested that...; a great variety of; a certain amount of sth.; make good use of; spare time; make rapid progress; as the saying goes; stick to; be successful in

第三步：连词成句

1. I suggest you read the English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning.

2. You should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well.

3. It is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school. Last but not least, a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises.

4. As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English, surely, you will make rapid progress.

5. Just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

6. If you stick to your dream and study hard, I'm sure you will be successful in your English study.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改