Question

【题目】春天来了，带着无限的娇美。小草已露出嫩芽，花朵也含苞待放，我们怎么能错过这大好的时光，不去旅游？假定你是学校学生会主席李明，请你代表学校同学写一封信给校长，请求学校组织春游，并陈述理由。

注意：1.词数：120左右；

2. 信的开头已为你拟好，不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Headmaster,

I’m Li Ming, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school._________________________________________

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Yours truly

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Headmaster,

I’m Li Ming, chairman of the Students’ Union of our school. Spring comes with all its glories. I’m writing to express our hope that the school should organize a spring outing for us students.

We believe that the spring outing will make us enjoy the beautiful scenery of nature, which can broaden our horizons and fill us with more knowledge. In addition, the air in the open fields is fresher and the fresh air will do a lot of good to our health. In the meanwhile, We think the pressure for us students is heavy and we always study with tension. The spring outing can give us a chance to take a test and relieve the pressure to learn more.

We sincerely hope it can meet with your approval.

Yours truly

Li Ming

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封请愿信。春天来了，带着无限的娇美。小草已露出嫩芽，花朵也含苞待放，我们怎么能错过这大好的时光，不去旅游？假定你是学校学生会主席李明，请你代表学校同学写一封信给校长，请求学校组织春游，并陈述理由。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本篇范文结构合理，行文流畅。作者在范文中使用了较多复合句，如同位语从句I’m writing to express our hope that the school should organize a spring outing for us students.；定语从句We believe that the spring outing will make us enjoy the beautiful scenery of nature, which can broaden our horizons and fill us with more knowledge.。这些体现了作者较高的语言运用能力。另外，in addition，in the meanwhile等连词词组的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。