Question

13．假如你是李华，你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极（Tai Chi），他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：
1．介绍学太极好处；2．负责联系学习地点和老师；
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Forbes，
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon．（高分句型一）I'm quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly．
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art，but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise．（高分句型二）Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives．（高分句型三）
Concerning your learning location and instructor，I'm so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you，for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country．（高分句型四）As a result，you can rely on me．
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你的英国网友Forbes打算抽空到中国学习太极（Tai Chi），他写信向你求助，请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：介绍学太极好处；负责联系学习地点和老师；2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：are willing to愿意；give you a hand帮助某人； not only，but also不仅，而且；As a result结果是；rely on依赖
It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon．（高分句型一）
Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art，but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise．（高分句型二）Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives．（高分句型三）
Concerning your learning location and instructor，I'm so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you，for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country．（高分句型四

解答 Dear Forbes，
       It is amazing for me to know that you show great preference for Tai Chi and are willing to learn it soon．（高分句型一）I'm quite sure that I can give you a hand gladly．
      Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art，but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective health exercise．（高分句型二）Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation and physical fitness that are so essential in our modern stressful lives．（高分句型三）
      Concerning your learning location and instructor，I'm so proud to tell you that I have the ability to recommend the best school and best trainer in our city to you，for actually my uncle is a master of Tai Chi who is always invited to instruct others all over the country．（高分句型四）As a result，you can rely on me．
      Looking forward to your coming!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．