10.阅读下面的短文,然后以约30个词概括短文的要点.
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women.Career women are healthier than housewives.Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders.A study shows that whenever the employment rate rises by 1%,the death rate decreases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%.All this comes down to one point:work is helpful to health.
Why is work good for health?It is because work keeps people busy,away from loneliness.Researches show that people feel unhappy,worried and lonely when they have nothing to do.Instead,the happiest are those who are busy.Work serves as a bridge between man and reality.By work,people come into contact with each other.By collective activities,they find friendship and warmth.This is helpful to health.The loss of work means the loss of everything.It affects man spiritually and probably makes him suffer from disease.
Besides,work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement.Work makes one feel his value and status in society.When a writer finishes his writing or a teacher sees his students grow,they are happy beyond words.
写作内容
以约30个词概括上文中的内容.
The author highlights the effect of work on people's health,because it can rid one of loneliness,and make one feel fruitful and proud of himself,which always contributes to a good body..
分析 本篇文中强调了努力工作可以给人带来健康和长寿,因为工作可以让人摆脱孤独,可以使一个人有成就感好自豪感,这一切对于一个健康的身体非常重要.
解答 The author highlights the effect of work on people's health,because it can rid one of loneliness,and make one feel fruitful and proud of himself,which always contributes to a good body.
点评 用大约30个词来概括一篇200字左右的文章,要求语言非常精炼,概括性强,并且要提纲挈领,准确到位,这就要求学生有极强的写作能力和归纳概括能力.