Question

5．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用 （\） 划掉． 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起） 不计分．
One Sunday last month I go shopping with my friends．Luckily in a crowded store，I had my wallet losing．I was such upset that I almost shouted．I was afraid to tell to my parents the truth．So I went back to school without some money．I didn't know what to do next．I didn't eat anything Monday．My roommate Mary found something wrong with me but she asked me about the pro blem．I told him the truth．Then Mary lent me some money，with that I lived through the terrible week．

Answer 1

分析 本文叙述了作者在一个星期天外出购物，因为商店的人多，不小心把自己的钱包丢了，自己回到了学校心情不好周一一天没有吃饭，室友知道这件事后主动把钱借给了她，她度过了最艰难的一周．

解答 One Sunday last month I go shopping with my friends．Luckily in a crowded store，I had my wallet losing．I was such upset that I almost shouted．I was afraid to tell to my parents the truth．So I went back to school without some money．I didn't know what to do next．I didn't eat anything∧Monday．My roommate Mary found something wrong with me but she asked me about the pro blem．I told him the truth．Then Mary lent me some money，with that I lived through the terrible week．
详解：
1．go改为went；考查动词时态，根据时间状语One Sunday last month 应该用一般过去式，故用went．
2．luckily改为Unluckily；考查副词，分析句意应为"不幸的是商店里人多，我的钱包丢了"，根据句意可知这是不幸的事故用unluckily．
3．losing改为lost；考查固定短语．句意：我的钱包被丢了．这里是have sth lost，这里sth与lose之间是被动关系，故用lost．
4．such改为so； 考查固定结构，这是"so+形容词+that"或"such+a/an+形容词+名词+that"结构，句中that前面是形容词upset，故用so．
5．去掉to； 考查动词，此处tell是及物动词，后面可直接跟宾语，故去掉to．
6．some改为any；考查代词，some用于肯定句，any用于否定句和疑问句，分析句意为"因此我回到学校时，身上没有钱了"，这是一个否定句，故用any．
7．Monday前面加on；考查介词，表示时间具体到某一天时前面要用介词on．
8．but改为and；考查连词，分析句意为"我的室友发现了我有了麻烦并且问我她问我出了什么问题"，根据句意此处应该用and表示并列．
9．him改为her；考查人称代词，这里上文已经有she asked me about the problem 代词应该上下文一致，故用her．
10．that改为which；考查定语从句，这是一个定语从句，先行词是some money，关系词在从句中做宾语，用于介词之后，只能用which．

点评 短文改错时要先了解文章的中心思想，根据短文大意确定基本时态，然后详细阅读短文，分析句式结构和句群关系，再运用所掌握的语法，词汇，固定短语等基础知识找出短文中的错误加以改正．