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【题目】假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中华民族传统文化，学生会面向学校国际部组织外国留学生报名参加“汉字听写大赛”，请你根据提示写一则英文启事，在校报上刊登。主要内容包括：

1.报名时请告知姓名和国籍。

2.听写范围：中国四大名著中的词汇。

3.参赛日期：2016年5月15日。

4．奖品：一套中国古典名著。

5.报名联系人：李华；电话：12345678910

注意：词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。(四大名著：the Four Great Classical Novels)

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Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? ______________________

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Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition. I’d like to share with you some details.

As scheduled, the competition is to be held on May 15th, 2016. You are supposed to get prepared before the competition. Above all, it’s recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the competition as soon as possible. If you want to go, please call Li Hua at 12345678910, stating your name and nationality. Don’t miss the chance of being the winner, and the appealing prize “a set of the four Great Classical Novels” is eagerly waiting for you.

Come on, don’t hesitate to take part! I’m sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress。

【解析】

试题分析：

本文要求为组织外国留学生报名参加“汉字听写大赛”写一则英文启示，内容根据题目所给信息进行合理组织。写作时注意以下几点：1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般将来，以第二称为主（you）。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】

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