Question

请找出下列短文中的错误，并直接在短文中改正。（每小题1.5分，共15分）

改错格式（要求）

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

When left college, Daisy got a good job in a company. But after she had

been worked there for some years, she decided to change. So she put notice in

several newspapers and said what experience she had and the kind of job she

would like to have. One of the answer she accepted was from a man was

looking for a job, too. This man wrote to her,“ madam, when you get a

new job, be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as

I have been trying to find a position as yours for a long time.” After she read

the letter, she suddenly realized that which she had done was real foolish.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

61left改为leaving  62 had been worked 中去掉been  63 put notice改为put a notice

64 answer改为answers   65 accepted改为received  66 man后加who

67 give your的your改为my  68 as yours中的as改为like  69 which改为what

70. real改为really

【解析】

试题分析：

61.句子的主语是Daisy，和动词leave构成逻辑上的主谓关系，用现在分词作时间状语。

62.句子的主语是she和动词work构成主动关系，用主动语态。

63.notice是可数名词，前加不定冠词，表泛指。帖一张告示。

64.固定结构：one of +名词复数。

65.accept的意思是“（主观）收下”；而本句表示的意思是她客观收的一个回答。Receive“客观收到”。

66.本句中有两个谓语动词，只有将其中一下变成从句或非谓语形式，所以第一种加上who或that 来构成定语从句作a man的定语；第二种可以直接去掉was，变成非谓语动词作a man的定语也行。

67.把我的名字给你现在的老板。考查句子逻辑一致。

68.as表法“象”是一个连词，连接句子，like表示“象”是一个介词，本句中后面的yours for a long time是一个短语，故用like。

69.她所做的，作动词do的宾语，用what。

70.修饰形容词foolish用副词。

考点：考查短文纠错

点评：考查考生在上下文中运用语法的能力和上下文串联的理解力。