Question

【题目】假定你是李华，Jane是美国人。在她暑假来中国旅游时你们相识，并成为好朋友。Jane回国后，你很想念她。请你根据以下要点，用英语给她写一封信，向她介绍一下你高中的新生活。

1.校园环境

2.老师和同学

3.你的感受和打算

注意：1.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3.词数100左右。书信开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jane,

How’s everything going?

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I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jane,

How’s everything going?I’m glad we have been friends since I met you last time.I miss you very much and thus I’m writing too tell you something about my new life at senior high school.

My school is as beautiful as a huge garden.There’s green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere,My teachers are all kind and experienced.I believe I’ll make great progress this term.My classmates are very friendly and I’ve made many new friends here.I feel that my new life is very exciting,but I also realize that it is full of challenges.I’ve decided to work hard so that I’ll have a bright future.Of course,I’ll also do more exercise to keep fit.

I’m looking for your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求你用英语Jane她写一封信，向她介绍一下你高中的新生活。内容要点包括：1.校园环境；2.老师和同学；3.你的感受和打算。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了状语从句so that I’ll have a bright future.以及make great progress和keep fit等词组。