Question

假定你是某中学学生，以下漫画描述的是你在某节课的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文在校园网英语专栏上发表你的看法。

内容要求：

1. 描述漫画内容；

2. 描述三个以上学生在校的不良行为及影响；

3. 发表个人感想。

注意：

1. 短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，连贯；

3. 词数120左右；

4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

Mind Your Behavior at School

Last Monday，Mr. Wang was giving us a lesson when Li Ming rushed into the classroom.

Answer 1

Mind Your Behavior at School

Last Monday, Mr. Wang was giving us a lesson when Li Ming rushed into the classroom. At that sight, Mr. Wang stopped his lesson, saying angrily, “Li Ming, you are late again. ” We students felt disturbed. Actually, such cases have been increasing at school over time.

Commonly, some students behave badly. Some often go to school late or stay absent from school, which quite annoys teachers. Besides, some others are talking loudly, sleeping or eating food in class. They eventually do poorly in their study. Worse still, some students disrespect their teachers, not greeting and listening to their advice.

Personally, such bad behavior should be forbidden at school, for students are expected to work hard at their lessons and show respect for teachers and their work. So it is necessary for students to promote their sense of responsibility and value. (126 words)

【解析】这是一篇漫画写作。主要围绕漫画内容，介绍在校学生不良行为，谈谈自己的感想。写作时注意要紧扣漫画内容，以及正确界定学生不良行为。本文采用经典的三段式写作法。文章第一段第二句Mr. Wang stopped his lesson, saying angrily, “Li Ming, you are late again. ”使用了非谓语动词作伴随状语；第一段最后一句such cases have been increasing at school over time.使用了完成进行时表示一直在….；第二段第二句Some often go to school late or stay absent from school, which quite annoys teachers，使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句；第二段最后一句some students disrespect their teachers, not greeting and listening to their advice.使用了非谓语动词作伴随状语；本文使用了许多好短语，如：At that sight一看见，absent from缺席，Worse still 还有糟糕的事，be expected to期待，it is necessary…to…是必要的；本文在词语运用上最大特点是副词的运用，第一段Actually事实上，第二段Commonly很普遍，第三段Personally个人而言，这些副词的使用使得文章提高了档次，增加了可读性。总结：副词运用得当会给文章增色不少，考生在写作时应多借鉴此方法。

考点：考查漫画写作