Question

13．请根据内容提示，用英语以"Life in Senior"为题写一篇短文，叙述你的高中生活．
内容提示：
★总体印象：激动、快乐、辛苦．
★实际生活：时间紧，常熬夜；作业多，考试多；设法放松，看书打球；克服困难，不断进步
★展望未来：充满信心．
要求：1．字数100左右．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯，但不能逐字翻译．
　　　  2．书写工整规范．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于半开放性作文，指是给出文章所要讨论的主要话题-高中生活．文字提示较少，要求考生进行合理的谋篇布局，运用合适的连接词对各要点之间进行串联，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．
亮点部分 本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：far from远不，远非；To our delight 令我们高兴的是；with the help of the teachers在老师的帮助之下；make full use of充分利用； Besides另外；made constant and great progress取得持续的巨大的进步

解答 Life in Senior
Life in Senior is both tiring，exciting and meaningful．As everyone knows，Senior is far from relaxing and easy．（高分句型）Every minute counts．Working late at night is often the case．There is much homework and we have to take many exams such as monthly exams．（高分句型）We have to meet with and overcome a lot of difficulties in our studies．To our delight，we have made constant and great progress with the help of the teachers．（高分句型）Besides，our lessons of course we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves girls reading colorful magazines and boys playing basketball．Though we are busy and tired，we still feel happy and confident of our future．（高分句型）

点评 本文属于半开放性作文，动笔前，一定要组织要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．