Question

【题目】书面表达 （满分15分）

假如你是李华，你的朋友Jack正在美国学习汉语。他学习汉语非常吃力，不知怎么学，请你给出建议，帮助他渡过难关。

内容要点如下：

1.多听中文广播，多看报。

2.找中国人聊天。

3．用汉语写日记。只要坚持下去，就一定能学会。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．信的开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack，

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jack，

I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in learning Chinese．However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice．Here are the tips to help you：

Firstly, why not listen to Chinese broadcast and read Chinese newspaper? If you do that, you will improve your Chinese step by step．Secondly, you should make Chinese friends as many as possible．You can talk to them in Chinese when you meet．In that way you will learn Chinese quickly．Thirdly, it would be a good idea to keep a diary in Chinese．As long as you work hard at Chinese, I think you will learn it well．Just as the saying goes: where there is a will, there is a way．

I hope you will find these ideas useful．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语take one’s advice采纳某人的建议；listen to听；step by step逐渐地；Thirdly, it would be a good idea to keep a diary in Chinese．这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；Just as the saying goes: where there is a will, there is a way还运用了谚语来对主题进行升华；