Should we give more attention to students’ health or grades?
The Chinese Education Ministry has urged all the students to participate in the winter long—distance running activity．And now every school is trying to meet the requirements．However, it aroused various arguments among people including education specialists，teachers，parents and students．
Some people say ‘‘yes” to this phenomenon．They think，for one thing，it can make more people care about physical education；for another，running can improve students’ health and promote their learning efficiency so they can have good grades．
While others hold opposite opinions about the activity．They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on what they will achieve in their subjects．Meanwhile，high requirements don’t mean．good health and many can’t do it everyday．What’s worse，some will suffer cold and injuries．
In my opinion，it’s all right for schools to pay more attention to students’ health and carry out the activity step by step．Remember a good body helps make high efficiency．
解析:
文笔要非常流畅，要把握所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明自己对志愿者工作的理解，以此来表达自己的决心。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。
