Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校外籍教师Miss Rose常常在课余时间辅导你英语口语，使你在上周学校举行的英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名。为此，你决定写一封感谢信，对Miss Rose的帮助表示真诚的感谢。
注意：1.文章包括上述内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右；3．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Rose,
I am writing to you
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.……
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Rose,
I am writing to you to tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school held a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won the first place. In my view, all the achievement that I have gained is owed to your help. During your spare time, you often spent so much time in helping me with my spoken English that I made rapid progress. During the competition, I followed your advice on how to behave and how to keep a good state, which led to my success. I'm grateful for your help. Without your help, I couldn't have won such a prize. I decide that I will make more efforts and try to make grater progress.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给外籍教师Miss Rose写一封感谢信，对Miss Rose的帮助表示真诚的感谢，原因是他常常在课余时间辅导你英语口语，使你在上周学校举行的英语演讲比赛中荣获第一名。考生写作时要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。