Question

众所周知，2012年11月9日党的十八大报告中提出了建设“美丽中国”的理念。近来，我校也围绕这一主题积极开展美丽校园的活动。作为一名高中生，请你就如何美化校园谈谈个人看法和建议。
内容要点：1.遵守校纪校规。 （如：凭电子学生证进出校园，升旗和早操做到快、齐、静……）
2．言行举止文明优雅，讲究卫生，爱护公物。
3．有良好的精神面貌，穿戴整洁干净，穿校服进出校园。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2 .文章的开头已经给出（不计入总词数），可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词：rules and regulations（规章制度），Electronic student ID（电子学生证）
mental outlook(精神面貌)
Recently, our school has been carrying out some meaningful activities to beautify the schoolyard…__________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently, our school has been carrying out some meaningful activities to beautify the schoolyard.
As we all know, school is another home of ours, which also needs protecting. As a member of the big family, we students should obey its rules and regulations. Such as going in and out with showing our Electronic student ID, when raising National flag and doing morning exercises, we’d better move fast, in order and keep quiet.
Also, it is important for us to behave ourselves in the campus. We each should be aware of the importance of looking after public things. We must pay attention to hygiene, not spitting in the daily life.
Last but not the least, having good mental outlook is significant as well. We should wear neatly and tidily when going to school. During our staying at school, we may as well wear school uniform.
It is the smallest things that count. Only when we form good habits can we be able to have a better studing environment.

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求写一篇关于如何美化校园的文章，来谈谈自己的看法和建议。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。
【亮点说明】范文使用了短语As we all know, Such as, behave ourselves, be aware of, looking after, pay attention to, as well, may as well等，使作文内容充实而不单调；范文使用了较多的语法知识，像定语从句which also needs protecting, it is important for us to...句型, 非谓语动词having good mental outlook, It is...that强调句型和倒装Only when we...can...等，语法知识掌握牢固；同时，范文还注意使用连接词连接上下文，像Also, Last but not the least等。