Question

随着“开心农场”“QQ农场”等娱乐游戏风靡互联网，许多中学生也加入了偷菜的行列。请你根据下表的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你个人的看法。

现   象	1. 沉迷其中，乐此不疲；2. 身在课堂，心在农场； 3. 作业拖拉，成绩下降。
原   因	1. 寻找农耕的乐趣； 2. 释放学习的压力；3. 拉近朋友的距离。
你的看法	……(至少两点)

注意：    1. 不要逐字翻译表格提示内容，应适当发挥。2. 开头已给出，不算入总词数。
3. 词数：120左右。
Nowadays, QQ Farm and Happy Farm are very popular among people from all walks of life. A large number of middle school students are also involved in the game.

Answer 1

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Some of them are addicted to it and take great delight in stealing vegetables online. In class, their minds are still wandering around the farm. They waste too much time on it so that they fail to hand in their homework in time and there is a sharp decline in their grades.
Many factors contribute to the popularity of the game. To begin with, it enables students to experience the pleasure of farming , which is beyond their reach in reality. In addition, students are under great pressure and farming online is a good way for them to relax. It can also bring friends closer and closer.
As far as I am concerned, though the game is really great fun, as senior students, we are supposed to focus on our studies. Also, I suggest schools starting after-school farming activities. Only in this way can students experience real happiness in farming.

解析试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文，所以首先要明确所要讨论的话题，并且需要用第一人称来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，适当发挥使文章看起来更充实，并且一定要写出自己的观点。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合作文的主题与开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
考点：提纲作文
点评：本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。