Question

假设你是李华，上个星期天在动物园游览时看到有人伤害动物园里的动物。请你根据下面提供的信息，写信给English Learners’ Lighthouse 的编辑，反映事实并发表看法。

提示:

1. 当时的情景：有人向动物投掷小石头或燃着的烟头，有人给动物喂不合适的食物等, 以此取乐；

2. 看法：看到动物受到故意伤害，深表震惊; 动物是人类的朋友，有自己的生存权利；应采取措施保护等。

注意: 1. 短文应包括所有要点, 可适当发挥;

2. 词数120个左右; 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you ______________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about an incident of animals being hurt by some people that happened in the zoo last Sunday.

I was watching the lovely monkeys playing in the zoo that day when I noticed someone threw small stones to the monkeys. Some gave burning cigarette ends to the monkeys and got them burnt. Others were feeding animals with food and fruits that are not fit for the animals. They did this just for their own pleasure.

I was shocked. Animals are our friends. They have their own right to live. It is our duty to protect them. Something must be done to prevent them from being hurt.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这篇书面表达是一篇话题作文。假设你是李华，上个星期天在动物园游览时看到有人伤害动物园里的动物。请你根据下面提供的信息，写信给English Learners’ Lighthouse 的编辑，反映事实并发表看法。提示已经给出。要求我们把内容翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态、语态，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。一定要提出自己的建议。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇、短语和高级句型为文章润色，避免全写成简单句。注意书信的格式；注意要求的字数在120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】I was watching the lovely monkeys playing in the zoo that day when I noticed someone threw small stones to the monkeys.句中包含了一个时间状语从句；Some…others…固定搭配；I hear that many animals, even some rare ones, are being hurt by some people on purpose.句中包含了一个宾语从句和现在完成时态的被动语态；Something must be done to prevent them from being hurt.句中用了高级词组prevent…from…和动名词被动式。

考点：书信类话题作文