Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Xiaolan, who is fourteen, a middle school student in Southern China. She is a one of the best student in her class and  she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressed an d going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

    

 a前加is  

 student--- students 

 she后去掉was

 seating---seated

 and---but

 obvious---obviously

 had---has

 long---longer

 going to后去掉the

 which---them

【解析】

试题分析：十四岁的中学生小兰去年荣获了青少年科学家奖。当她做在教室里的时候，她与旁人无异，然而课下的生活，她却是与别人截然不同的，因为她天生残疾，腰部以下没有知觉。别人能够做成的事情，对于她来说却是要付出很多。

 考查句子结构。Xiaolan, who is fourteen, a middle school student分析结构可知句子缺少谓语动词，所以在a前加is  。

 考查名词复数。She is one of the best student。one of后面需跟复数名词，意思是“….其中之一”，所以把student改为 students 。                

 考查谓语动词。she was won an award ，句中动词won做谓语，所以把she后was去掉 。

 考查非谓语动词。When seating in the classroom，从结构可知，该短语做状语，seat和句子主语she 是被动关系，所以把seating改为seated 。                                                             

 考查连词用法。and after class her life is different. 从语境可知此句和上句she looks just like all her classmates是转折关系，所以把and改为but。

 考查副词用法。her life is obvious different。此处different是形容词，要用副词修饰，所以把obvious-改为obviously 。

 考查动词时态。She had to use a wheelchair全文讲述现在的事情，所以把had改为has 。

 考查形容词用法。it often takes her a little long 从语境可知此处是她与别人相比做事所用的时间要长，所以把long改为longer 。

 考查冠词用法。and going to the school 。固定短语go to school “去上学”，故去掉the。

 考查代词用法。and one of which received an award 。 因为有连词and所以后面是并列句，故需要把关系代词which改为人称代词them 。

考点：考查短文改错。