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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advices on how to form a band.

I, together by two boys and two girls from different classes in our school, wanted to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance, but they still have many problems to solve. I’d like to know that we should play one kind of music or different style to start with. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? Why can we get more chances to perform? In addition, we’d appreciate if you would be come up with a name for our band.

Thanks to your considering our above questions, Mr. Cousins. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】考查名词单复数。advice为不可数名词。故将advices改为advice。

考查介词。固定搭配“together with”与…一起。故将by改为with。

考查动词时态。文章使用一般现在时，另根据主语为I，故将谓语动词wanted改为want。

考查代词。根据上句我们都喜欢流行音乐和现代舞，但是我们还有许多问题亟待解决。文章使用第一人称，故将they改为we。

考查连词。句意：我想知道我们是否应该演奏一种音乐或以不同的风格开始。“whether…or”是否。故将that改为whether。

考查名词单复数。不同的风格，故将style改为styles。

考查副词。根据句意“我们怎样才能获得更多的表演机会呢？”故将why改为how。

考查代词。真正的宾语从句为“if you would come up with a name for our band.”此处应添加形式宾语it做动词appreciate的宾语。

考查系动词。Come up with提出，为不及物动词短语。故不使用被动语态。故去掉be。

考查介词。Thanks to 幸亏，多亏；thanks for谢谢。根据题意，故将介词to改为for。