Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

A tourist bus wound its way into a mountain area. On the way, two passengers—a couple of young lovers—were very attracted by the beautiful scenery that they called on a stop to get off the bus. They were left behind and the bus went on. Suddenly, they heard a loud boom ahead of the road. There was a huge rock rolled down a hill that hit the bus and fell with it into a deep valley. The lovers were greatly shocked by the news that no passengers on board were survived. When they calmed down they sighed and expressed their feelings in a few words.

The above story was told by a women guide when we were riding a tourist bus to scenic mountain. She asked us to guess that the lovers said immediately after the disaster that they had narrow escaped.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】mountain→mountainous

【2】very→so

【3】on→for

【4】There→It

【5】rolled→rolling

【6】把were survived中的were去掉

【7】women→woman

【8】在scenic mountain前加a

【9】that→what

【10】narrow→narrowly

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】mountain→mountainous 句意：多山的地区。形容词修饰名词，故把mountain改为mountainous。

【2】very→so so...that...如此……以至于……，引导结果状语从句，故把very改为so。

【3】on→for 句意：要求下车。call for要求，需要，故把on改为for。

【4】There→It 句意：是一块从山上滚落的岩石击中了公共汽车。此句是强调句式，故把There改为It。

【5】rolled-→rolling 现在分词作后置定语，表示“正在滚动的”。故把rolled改为rolling。

【6】把were survived中的were去掉 在此句中survive（幸存）是不及物动词，无被动语态，故把were survived中的were去掉。

【7】women→woman 前面有冠词a，故判断名词应该用单数，故把women改为woman。

【8】在scenic mountain前加a 句意：一座风景优美的山。故在scenic mountain前加a。

【9】that→what 句意：她要求我们猜那对爱人说了什么。此处是what引导的宾语从句，what在从句中作宾语，表示“什么”，故把that改为what。

【10】narrow→narrowly 副词修饰动词，故把narrow改为narrowly。

【知识拓展】

1.a narrow escape九死一生；a narrow vicotry幸胜；a narrow defeat惜败。

2.不及物动词无被动语态

happen/break out/come about/occur/take place发生；disappear消失；appea出现。The story happened in 2016.这故事发生在2016年。