Question

【题目】应用文写作

假定你是Jane，你的笔友李华最近因为考试密集、学业繁重，身体感到不适，严重影响了学习。因此，他发e-mail给你，寻求你的建议和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示予以回复。

写作要点：1. 合理的饮食； 2. 适度的锻炼；3. ......

注意：1. 词数80左右

2. 开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数。

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days. ________________________________

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Best wishes!

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class. Here is my advice.

First, have three meals a day and never neglect your breakfast. Keep a balanced diet. Second, taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice. As you know, daily exercise helps build a strong body. You can do some sports to refresh yourself if weather permits. Finally, don’t stay up to make sure you have a good sleep every night.

I think it would be beneficial if you could follow my suggestions. Hope you’ll feel well soon.(96 words)

Best wishes.

Jane

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲作文。本文要求考生以Jane的身份给李华写信，提出你的建议和帮助。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时的时态。要点：1.得知对方因为考试密集、学业繁重，身体感到不适，严重影响了学习。感觉非常难受；2.建议：合理的饮食；适度的锻炼；不要熬夜，保证有充足的睡眠。在写作的时候，在各要点之间适当添加串联成分，让上下文更加合理流畅。尽量使用考生熟悉的句式，避免出错，提高获得高分的可能性。