Question

【题目】根据下列语境，写一篇100词左右的短文。

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。

请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：

1. 目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；

2. 骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。

参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）

注意：1.词数：120词左右；

3. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride

Bicycles".______________________________________________________________

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone,

I'm Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycle".

As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standard, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problem then? As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they don't give off waste gas. What's more, riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to out health.

Therefore, let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一份演讲稿，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是参加“Let's Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

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