Question

【题目】英语课上老师让同学们写一篇英语文章，谈谈对当前中学生中存在的某些饮食现状的看法。

提示如下：

1.越来越多的中学生不喜欢吃蔬菜水果，甚至不吃早餐，而是喜欢吃垃圾食品；

2.对健康的饮食习惯同学们有不同看法；

3.你的看法和观点。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Healthy eating habits are very important for our health. We should build healthy eating habits. We should eat fresh vegetables and fruits everyday.They supply rich and the necessary vitamins for us. We also should eat less meat everday.And we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night. Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions. Junk food is a fatal killer for our health so that we should stay far from them. It is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in the morning. It is very bad for our health. Breakfast is the most important meal for people.

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求英语课上老师让同学们写一篇英语文章，谈谈对当前中学生中存在的某些饮食现状的看法。考虑用一般过去时来写。要点：1.越来越多的中学生不喜欢吃蔬菜水果，甚至不吃早餐，而是喜欢吃垃圾食品；2.对健康的饮食习惯同学们有不同看法；3.你的看法和观点。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如:focus on集中于，far from远离。还使用了定语从句Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions增加了文章的可读性。