Question

Different people have different ideas about music. 1.             

For me,I like rock music because it’s so exciting.But   2.            

my favorite rock band,the“Foxy Ladies”,are one of  3.            

the most famous rock band in the world.I also like     4.             

the pop music.My classmate Li Lan loves dance music 5.            

because she enjoys in dancing.My best friend,Jane,    6.           

likes Jazz music and she thinks Jazz is real cool.       7.            

My brother also likes rock much,thinking them amazing. 8.           

But my mother thinks rock is boring.“I like some relaxed 9.           

music, ”she says. That’s she likes country music,I think  10.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

1.√

2.But→And

3.are→is

4.band→bands 

5.去掉the 

6.去掉in 

7.real→really

8.them→it 

9.relaxed→relaxing

10.That’s后加why

【解析】

1.略

2.行文逻辑错误。上文是我喜爱摇滚音乐，下文是介绍我最喜爱的乐队，二者并无转折关系，而表并列，故改But为And。

3.主谓一致错误。此句主语为单数。

4.名词单数错误。摇滚乐队不止一个，故用复数。

5.冠词错误。music为不可数名词，其前用零冠词表示类别。

6.及物动词误用作不及物动词。enjoy为及物动词，其后不能接介词in。

7.副词错误。应用副词really表示事实上或真正的。

8.代词错误。指代上文中的单数名词rock应用it，不能用them。

9.非谓语动词错误。relaxed放松的，冷静的，镇定的。relaxing有助于休息的，令人放松的，轻松的。

10.连接词缺失。由上文可知，前面所讲皆为妈妈喜欢乡村音乐的原因，故应加连接副词why。