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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During last summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it, did I realized that it was no easy job. I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep. This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this forgettable experience. Not only was it kind of fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but I also learned to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

【答案】①found后加a

②worked →working

③realized →realize

④On →In

⑤home前面的to去掉

⑥very →so

⑦tiring →tired

⑧forgettable →unforgettable

⑨or →and

⑩which →who

【解析】作者在文中讲述了自己难忘的暑假打工的经历和收获，这种相反的向后的时间安排对我来说太难了，我经常感到疲倦。但我很高兴我有这个难忘的经历。我也学会了欣赏那些当别人在休息在睡觉时他们却在 艰苦的工作的人。

①考查冠词。句意：我找到了一份兼职工作，job“工作”是可数名词，表示泛指的一份业余工作，故found后加a。

②考查非谓语动词。句意：我找到一份兼职工作，晚上在牙刷厂工作。动词work在句中作状语，句中主语与其是主动关系所以用-ing形式，故worked改为working。

③考查动词形式。句意：直到我经历了它，我才意识到这不是一件容易的工作。 此处是倒装句，did表示过去时态，后面动词要用原形，故realized改为realize。

④考查介词。固定搭配in the morning“在早上”，介词用in，故On改为In。

⑤考查副词。home是副词，前面不加介词。固定搭配come home表示“回家”，故去掉to。

⑥考查固定句型。句意：这种相反的向后的时间安排对我来说太难了以至于我经常感到疲倦。固定句型so... ... that... ...“如此…以至于”，故把very改为so。

⑦考查形容词。tiring“无聊的，累人的”，主语是物；tired“疲倦的”，主语是人。此处修饰人用tired，故tiring改为tired。

⑧考查形容词。句意：我很高兴有这次难忘的经历。此处指“难忘的”，故forgettable改为unforgettable。

⑨考查连词。此处指和星星月亮一起升起照耀，同步行动，moon和stars是并列关系而不是选择关系，故改or为and。

⑩考查定语从句。句意：我也学会了欣赏那些当别人在休息在睡觉时他们却在 艰苦的工作的人。句中包含定语从句，先行词是those指那些人，在定语从句中作主语用who引导，故改which为who。