Question

【题目】阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it.

"It is true that you cannot sing;" said the fox, "but look how beautiful you are!"

"0h，but what good is all this beauty;" cried the bird, "with such an unpleasant voice!"

"Listen," said the fox, "each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can't you just be happy about what you have already got?"

【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括短文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就“停止抱怨并珍惜自己所拥有的“这一主题发表你的看法，内容包括：

（l）你或你身边的人的类似事例；

(2）谈谈你对该主题的看法。

【写作要求】

1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得

直接引用原文中的句子：

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】Ths story is about a peacock who comptalned about h1S ugty yoke whiie actualty he s very beautiful A fox ad ised him to be content with what he was blessed with

The peaco ck reminds of my friend Mikewho is always upt. He complained his parents are too busy to stay at home with him , He complains he is too short to play basketball well. But he never realizes that his parents love him so much,and how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the of his classmates

Many people arotmd us focus on what they want instead of what they have. As a result of their endless desires they are often dissatistíed. In my opinionwe should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much. If we remain grateful for what we already have and what we can fulfill, we may live a happier life.

【解析】本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照“三段式”模板写：第一段：概括所给短文要点；第二段：过渡词引出主题句—阐述理由或列举事例；第三段：个人观点，特别要注意第一段的概括，用自己的语言概括，不能照搬原文。

时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时。人称以第一和第三人称为主。

亮点句子：

This story is about a peacock who complained about h1S ugly yoke while actuality he s very beautiful.这里是由who引导的定语从句，先行词是a peacock，who在定语从句中作主语。

The peacock reminds of my friend Mike who is always upset.这里是由who引导的非限制性定语从句，who在定语从句中作主语。

But he never realizes that his parents love him so much, and how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the of his classmates.

这里是由that和how引导的宾语从句，作动词realize的宾语。

由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在定语从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容。