Question

16．Bullying isn't just confined to the real world．According to the Cyberbullying Research Center，almost half of all young people have been bullied online．Cyberbullying is a form in which people harm other people online deliberately．And unlike the traditional bully，the electronic bully can remain anonymous，so we often don't know who they are．Cyberbullying includes things like spreading lies and rumors online，sending or forwarding unpleasant message via instant messaging，text or on social networks．It's becoming very common among teenagers hese days．They are campaigns against cyberbullying and some places have adopted laws to prevent it．

Kate is a victim of cyberbully．It's so bad that she doesn't want to leave the house．Someone from school has put message on social media saying she's ugly and she should die．It's terrible．

【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词写出上下文概要；
2．用约120个单词写作以下相关内容：
（1）网络暴力的原因和影响；
（2）从社会规范和个人行为谈谈如何应对网络暴力．
【写作要求】
1．发表观点时必须提供理由或论据
2．阐述观点、提供论据或叙述经历时，不能直接引用原文语句
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．
Cybebullying issue has been a hard nut to crack，which affects students'daily life and even brings about psychological problems．The descriptions presented above are typical examples．
Quite a few factors give rise to the hot issue．To begin with，many media online expose children to negative information，especially concerning violence，which will be rooted in children's heart and mislead them to bullying．Besides，inadequate parental education should also be responsible for their children's ignorance of laws and indifference to others'feelings．They will end up appealing tomore simple but rude ways to serve their purpose．As a consequence，not only does it endanger children's physical condition but also causes many mental problems．
From my point of view，there is no simple solution to cyberbullying．Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring as well as moral education from both schools and parents．It's only in this way that students can grow up healthily and we may build a harmonious society．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
To begin with，many media online expose children to negative information，especially concerning violence，which will be rooted in children's heart and mislead them to bullying
首先，许多媒体在线让孩子接触负面信息，特别是关于暴力，将植根于孩子的心灵，误导他们去欺负人．
高分句型二：
As a consequence，not only does it endanger children's physical condition but also causes many mental problems．
因此，它不仅危害儿童的身体状况也造成了诸多的心理问题．

解答 Cybebullying  issue  has  been  a  hard  nut  to  crack，which  affects  students'daily  life  and  even  brings  about psychological problems．The descriptions presented above are typical examples．
  Quite a few factors give rise to the hot issue．To begin with，many media online expose children to negative information，especially concerning violence，which will be rooted in children's heart and mislead them to bullying（高分句型一）．Besides，inadequate  parental  education  should  also  be  responsible  for  their  children's  ignorance  of  laws  and indifference to others'feelings．They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways to serve their purpose．As a consequence，not only does it endanger children's physical condition but also causes many mental problems（高分句型二）．
  From my point of view，there is no simple solution to cyberbullying．Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring as well as moral education from both schools and parents．It's only in this way that students can grow up healthily and we may build a harmonious society．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．