Question

5．假定你是李华．最近你所居住的城市的雾霾严重影响了人们的生活．请根据写作要点给报社写一篇稿件反映这一问题．
写作要点：
1．雾霾（smog）带来的危害； 2．你的建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．行文连贯，语篇完整；
3．文中不得透露个人真实信息．

Answer 1

分析 本题考查雾霾危害和建议的话题，根据材料中提供的要点信息阐述．学生可联系生活常识适当发挥，合情合理即可．围绕雾霾危害和建议进行论述．主要人称为第三人称，基本时态以一般现在时为主．
首先是危害，第二段是建议和展望．同学们基本上只要按照题目给出的要点进行发挥即可．一方面，要注意文章的结构，如as we all know，in the first place，to solve the problem，Firstly，Also，What's more，Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体，更为流畅．另一方面，还要注意交际的得体性，如文章可使用when it comes to，not only…but also…，I'd like to等使句式多样、语气较为婉转．
参考词汇和短语：as we all know，Firstly，Also，What's more，Last but not least等可以让文章成为一个整体，更为流畅．when it comes to，not only…but also…，I'd like to使句式多样、语气较为婉转．

解答 As we all know，smog has always been a serious problem in our city，which has done great harm to our daily life．（高分句型一）Recently it has become more and more serious．The heavy smog has caused many traffic accidents，which has brought great sadness to the families．（高分句型二）In the street，you can see many people wear masks．But unluckily，many old people and babies can't escape suffering from illness caused by smog．（雾霾的危害）
   Therefore，it is very urgent for us to take measures to reduce the smog．It is very vital to educate people，especially factory owners to raise awareness of protecting the environment．（高分句型三）Moreover，people should go to work by bus or bike instead of driving every day．And media should call on citizens to work together to do something to save the air that we can't live without．（提出建议）

点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．