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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Like everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kind of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. On the way down I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly．Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel in the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．

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【解析】【试题分析】

【1】two-days→two-day 考查形容词。a two-day trip是复合名词，用连字符连接的名词应该用单数。

【2】famous前面加a 考查冠词的基本用法。mountain是可数名词，这里是泛指，所以要加不定冠词a。

【3】noon后面加when 考查连词。It was almost noon 和 we arrived at the foot of the mountain都是简单句，必须用复合连词when把它们连接起来，构成时间状语从句。

【4】them→us 考查代词的用法。作者和父母一起去旅游了，用“我们”。句意：我们三个都很兴奋。

【5】visiting→visited 考查动词时态。三个并列的过去式动词fed , visited and told，故 visiting改为visited。

【6】picture→pictures 考查名词的单复数。picture是可数名词，从文中可知，作者拍了不止一张照片。故picture改为pictures。

【7】passes→passed 考查动词时态。作者旅游的时间发生在过去，故passes改为passed。

【8】and→but 考查连词的用法。食物贵与服务好是转折关系，不是并列关系。故把and改为but。

【9】very→so 考查固定句型。so...that...如此……以至于……。句意：我太累了以至于头挨着枕头就睡着了。

【10】删去at the moment中的at 这里the moment引导时间状语从句，意为“一……就”。故删去at the moment中的at。