Question

2．请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文．内容包括：

（1）描述画面；
（2）概述其含义；
（3）谈谈个人感想．
注意：
（1）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
参考词汇：凿，钻：bore
In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it．A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading．
This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom．The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to"steal"light from his neighbor‘s house to read at night．The moral of the story is to spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be．
Of course，things are totally different today．It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts．Hard work pays off．We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future．．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文，主题是古时候的一则成语"凿壁偷光"．写作时可按"三段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述其含义，最后发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：a ray of 一丝…..），be absorbed in（完全投入到…..），spare no effort（不遗余力），get discouraged（泄气），pay off（获得报偿），take pains to do （努力做），get prepared for（为…..做准备）．

解答 In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it．【高分句型】A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading．（描述图片）
This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom．The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to"steal"light from his neighbor‘s house to read at night．The moral of the story is to spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be．（概述含义）
Of course，things are totally different today．It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts．Hard work pays off．【高分句型】We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future．（个人感想）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．