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3．假设你是李津，为响应国家厉行节约的号召，请你以"为资源、为环保，厉行节约"为主题，向某英语报社编辑写一封信，表达你对此主题的看法，提出你的建议．
内容主要包括：
1．节约与资源的关系--节省资源造福子孙等．
2．节约与环保的关系--减少浪费改善环境等．
3．举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约．
4．倡导社会保持节约的优良传统．
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to share my opinions about trying to save both for natural resources and the environment．Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．（高分句型一）As students，we should make contributions to saving resources and protecting our environment．For example，we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books．In this way，more trees would be saved．What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．（高分句型二）
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．
与此同时，节约能帮我们避免制造浪费，那样可以使得我们的家园更加的美好．
高分句型二：
What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．
除此以外，我们中国人有养成节约的优良传统而且视浪费为一种可耻的行为，所以我们号召我们每个人做自己能做的一起来使我们的美好生活一直持续下去．
句型一 ①saving can help us avoid producing waste 该句是使用了现在分词作主语
           ②which will make our homeland more beautiful．该句是一个由which作关系代词，且在从句中充当主语的非限制性定语从句，which替代前面整个主句的内容．
句型二 what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．该句是一个由what充当连接词，位于动词do后面的一个宾语从句
除此以外，本书面表达还使用了以下重要短语和固定用法：make contribution to doing sth      what's more

解答 Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．（高分句型一）As students，we should make contributions to saving resources and protecting our environment．For example，we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books．In this way，more trees would be saved．What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．（高分句型二）
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin

点评 本书面表达为提纲类，写作时应注意观点的论述要依据所给的文字提示或说明，尽量做到用词准确无误，语言简洁明了．