Question

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你周末滑冰时不慎将胳膊摔折，因而未能参加英语考试。请根据以下要点给你的外籍教师Mrs．Clemens写一封电子邮件：

1．表达歉意并解释缺考原因；

2．询问补考时间及课外作业(如阅读书目、作业要求等)。

注意：

1．词数：l20—150；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mrs．Clemens，

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Mrs.Clemens,

  I’m writing to make an apology to you .Much as I like your English class , I was absent from your test .Last weekend , I was happily skating when suddenly I fell by accident and had my left arm broken.

  I’d like to ask you to give me a chance to take a make-up test .Please let me know when it is convenient for you after you make the arrangement .In addition , I’d also like to know your homework for me , such as the reading list for books and the essay to write .Finally , I’d appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for homework.

  I’m sorry to have to put you to so much trouble .Wish you all the best !

  Looking forward to your early reply .

                                              Your.

                                               Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：电子邮件是一种常见的写作体裁，要求语言简洁明了、通俗易懂，而且要开门见山提出写信的目的。就本篇书面表达而言，在写作时要注意两个方面的要点，一是表达歉意并解释缺考原因；二是询问补考的相关信息，所以在语言上要格外注意委婉礼貌，可以使用的礼貌用语：Would you please …..; I would appreciate it if ….; I will be grateful if you can …;Do you mind doing …..等等。在结构安排上可以分两段分别介绍两个要点，然后礼貌地用looking forward to your reply来结束邮件内容。在时态选择上前半部分解释原因时要使用一般过去时，而后半部分则可以使用一般现在时态；此外，写作时还要注意恰当使用连接词，以使文章语言连贯流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇范文语言自然流畅、文字通俗简练，语气礼貌委婉，符合这类邮件内容对语言的要求。本文开门见山向老师表示了歉意，然后做进一步解释，在下一段中询问了一些自己想了解的问题，在结构安排上条理性较强，而且在段中使用in addition、also、finally等连接词，使文章层次清晰，上下文衔接自然。此外，作者还使用了让步状语从句much as I like your class，时间状语从句when suddenly I fell by accident and had my left arm broken.和经典句式I’d appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for homework.，祈使句Wish you all the best !等，成功地做到了句式的多变，也造就了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲类作文。